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00 – The Grey Edge – Cover Page
Posted on
April 7, 2010
by
Stormy
[Current version of the WIP cover, comments are welcomed.]
Mags’ left arm doesn’t look right, and it’s barely visible.
That’s just what comes to mind. 🙂
Otherwise, eye-catching. How’s it look as a thumbnail?
The black and white of Magnolia’s outfit makes for good contrast, and is, indeed eye-catching.
The issue with the left arm is that there isn’t enough room between Mags and Taylor for her upper arm, so the forearm doesn’t quite look connected.